Open-ended

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Open-ended

Postby robert adams » Fri Dec 02, 2005 6:34 pm

A single lonely leaf
hanging on.
Waiting for the next breeze
to set it free.
Write about it, then Get over it!
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A single Peanut

Postby Gideon » Thu Dec 08, 2005 12:33 pm

A peanut on the railway track,
its heart was all a-flutter.
Round the corner came a train.
Toot toot,
Peanut butter.

Sorry Robert. I couldnt resist that. :mrgreen:

EDIT: Hey, it's open-ended, whatever works.

thanks,
robert

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Postby robert adams » Sat Feb 11, 2006 2:32 pm

peanut butter on the track,

better clean it off.

better to stay on track,

than to fall off.
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Postby robert adams » Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:02 pm

falling off would be to easy,

just to give up, not a care,

but staying on, riding it out,

man, what a thrill, do I dare?
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Postby robert adams » Tue Aug 22, 2006 3:06 am

dare, dare, stare, stare, care, care, hare, hare, ...

wait, that is a rabbit,
maybe we should nabbit,
it could become a habbit,
of ...
daring to care about staring at the hare.
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Re: Open-ended

Postby robert adams » Fri Jun 19, 2009 11:25 pm

habits....

good or bad,
old and new,

some, like an old pair of shoes,
are very hard to get rid of.

some, like a new pair of shoes,
are very hard to get used to.
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Re: Open-ended

Postby robert adams » Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:34 pm

getting used to time going by
getting used to wondering why
can't get used to life alone
can't get used to your heart of stone.
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Re: Open-ended

Postby robert adams » Sun Dec 04, 2016 11:01 pm

would a heart of stone be better than no heart at all?
can you share your life with a stone?
can the stone share its life with you?
would it want to?
would you want it to?
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Re: Open-ended

Postby robert adams » Thu Aug 31, 2017 8:30 pm

gotta stone you can loan me?
or are you just lonely and stoned?
or just a lonely stone?
or simply stoned alone?

naw, just a plain ole rock lookin for a roll....
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